Visit to Bath today! We got up, got dressed, and ate breakfast then left and started our drive. We later arrived in Bath. We stopped for lunch before driving into Cheddar to see the Cheddar Caves, the Cheddar Factory, and THE CHEDDAR MAN! Once we had finished with lunch we got into the car and were on our way. Once we had arrived at the Cheddar Cheese Factory, Sarah and I stepped out of the car and walked through the door where we were greeted by our tourguide. The lady brought us into the back where she showed us EVERYTHING including... well cheese, cheese, and cheese! The factory was HUGE and mostly big metal tubs and tall metal stair cases that didn't look too stable. She ended the tour in the gift shop where my aunt bought me some very old sharp Cheddar cheese. We left the factory and soon after arrived at the Cheddar Caves. We got out and walked across a big sand parking lot. The check in building was less of a building and more of portable building. So I followed Sarah up the small stair case and through the bright green door. I sat down on a small bench while my aunt checked us in and payed the 10 dollar toll for the both of us. They gave us a flash light and sent us in. We wandered through steep tunnels with what seemed like icicles of rock hanging over our heads and bright colorful lights shining up the walls. Once we made it to the bottom of the tunnel Sarah pointed out something sitting in the corner of the cave and I shined the flashlight at it when the stream of light reached the corner I spotted something that made me drop my flashlight! When I found it, picked it up, and re-situated it to shine back at the corner I realized that I wasn't wrong what I had seen was a real skeleton. Supposedly they called him the Cheddar Man. We got out of there as fast as possible and next we headed to the Cheddar Gorge. I had only been there one time before that when I was only little. The gorge was amazing it actually looked like melted cheese dripping from the walls!!! We stayed another night in Bath at the Webbington Hotel.
Thursday, February 18, 2010
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Great length. it was easy to visualize what was going on.
-Mr Grizzley
Amazing! One of the best ones I've seen today... You know how I LOVE editing, right? What I would suggest is that a friend or family member read it over and even give you more ideas and such. I for one would be more than happy to do that!!!
P.S. I especially loved "The walls were painted a bright golden orange and the floor had nice blue carpeting. She sat me down and started to explain to me what the organization did, how they functioned, and what she and I would be attempting in the next few days. Amazing work on those few sentences! It was really descriptive and and clear.
Great Job..... umm emily
great detail, i loved how you described everything in detail. It really made the story beleivable. great job!!!!!!!!
oh and i LOVE the picture you chose, its super intense and kinda scary but in a good way... or not i dunno but it is awesome.
i loved your blog it was one of my favorites. it keeps on going on and on in a good way it really gives you a full day.
I really love the first picture of the boy with the gun. I also loved how you said you thought the trip would be sad and depressing, but then when you got there everything was cheery and happy, and that just being around the kids made you happy!
nice job maddy, i really like your blog. your picture goes well with everything. your sentences flowed really nicely and i enjoyed reading it
I really like this post on uganda
I was going to write a lot this time but I think Emily did enough for everyone. Anyway, I liked your blog so much and the quote and the beginning was really funny!
NiKE
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